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Drown
The day nobody saw me there
Blank to the sky, vacant stare
Shining sun and tranquil air
And too late will someone care
Never wanted to be undone
So helpless under the guilty sun
Bare feet pacing by the lake
Under the waves the memories fade to take
Purple, gold, red and blue,
Once-living colours every hue
Visions distorted under sea
Melting into gray
I guess I'll be gone like the autumn leaves of a silent tree
Another time, another day...
The day nobody saw me there
Blank to the sky, vacant stare
Shining sun and tranquil air
And too late will someone care
Never wanted to be undone
So helpless under the guilty sun
Bare feet pacing by the lake
Under the waves the memories fade to take
Purple, gold, red and blue,
Once-living colours every hue
Visions distorted under sea
Melting into gray
I guess I'll be gone like the autumn leaves of a silent tree
Another time, another day...
I couldn't sleep last night, so I wrote this little poem in bed...it's about somebody drowning. Hope you like it, although I was sorta drowsy when I wrote it.
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fuck that was good.
i wish i could write poetry like that.
i wish i could write poetry like that.